www.miabellagold.com

[MiaBellaGold]

Please give me feedback regarding my site - in development stages right now. Thanks!

[Lori]

Hi Amy,

I confess that I AM partial to flowers :flower:, but I think it looks FABULOUS. You did this all yourself Amy?

Warm Wishes,

Lori

[justinpowell]

Amy:

Your site looks good. Overall you have a very clean-looking site with a judicious use of colors and graphics. You also make your newsletter sign-up and the "Ready To Start - Click Here" links prominent. The product page is also extremely friendly to search engine spiders. These are all great things.

A few things I'd fine-tune would be to:
- Reduce the amount of copy on the home page. While it's good from a search engine standpoint to have relevant keywords early and often on the home page, having too much copy makes the visitor have to scroll down to take everything in. Trying to make the copy more concise can make it 'snappier', easier to read, and visually more clean for the visitor while still keeping the relevent keywords in for search engines.
- I'd also try to make the "Why Mia Bella Gold" page more concise; the goal should be able to tell customers immediately why they should do business with you.
- Increase the spacing between the options in your navigation bar; they're a little close and run together somewhat on certain browsers
- Make the "Weekly Drawing" and "Request Information" links more prominent and use a stronger Call To Action.
- I'd consider removing the ad from your contact page

I hope you find these thoughts useful. Good luck!

[Debbi]

Hi Amy,

I love the colors on your site and the flower, very nice. The only thing I noticed (and I'm being picky here) is that when I read your content I wasn't sure if I could BUY candles or if I was becoming a DISTRIBUTOR. I might be tired (because I usually am) but if it were me, I would make it very clear what you are offering.


Best of luck!
D

[Lori]

Hi Amy,

I want to buy a candle -- do you sell them outright? I'm after the 'Cinnamon Bella Buns'...

Actually what I really want is another of this awesome candle our neighbors gave us when we were selling our house. It says 'Apple Cinnamon Cake' bakery collection candles... but I can't find it anywhere.

The one on your website sounds like it could be close -- I hope!

Lori

[smbwallace]

I LOVE IT!!! Purple is my favorite color. I love your picture and the explanation, too.