http://home-based-business-opportunity-dot.com

[Anonymous]

Hello Everyone

I was wondering if you could give me some feedbak on a site I have just built.

http://home-based-business-opportunity-dot.com/

I am also looking for link partners should you be interested.

http://home-based-business-opportunity-dot.com/links/directory/

Thanks for your time

[Debbi]

Hi,

Your site isn't bad, although there is a huge amount of text, which makes it a bit difficult to sort out exactly what you're offering here. I would suggest adding some more graphics to break up the text a bit and add some color interest.

Also, I'm not sure I'd put the google ads at the very top of the page - it's always a toss up. Putting up there is really encouraging people to click immediately away from your site rather than stick around and see what you have to offer. :)

Best of luck!

dc

[Lori]

With a content site... I think the googs at the top are a good idea.

With a site that is actually selling a product or service, I agree with Debbi.

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